Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Keeping Things Whole, Mark Strand

In a field
I am the absence
of field.

This is
always the case.
Wherever I am
I am what is missing.

When I walk
I part the air
and always
the air moves in
to fill the spaces
where my body's been.

We all have reasons
for moving.
I move
to keep things whole.

5 comments:

  1. Kate I love this one, but I think you should cut or replace the last stanza -- too final maybe? The movement you have in this is great though.

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  2. hahaha, this is mark strand, olga.


    wah wah wahhhhhhh

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  3. ive never read this poem before...its really nice...a nice, cold thought.
    i need to read more mark strand
    maria saw him at mason's fall for the book, and really enjoyed it(i think)

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  4. He is hit or miss. I really love this poem and a few more that are similar to this.

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