Tuesday, December 4, 2007

(have i ever told anyone that about half of my poems start as haikus and are quickly revised?)

with a clank and a
hiss the house comes alive and
breathes in. outside, snow.
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5 comments:

  1. ITVDecember 6, 2007 at 10:11 AM

    most of my poems start as filthy pick up lines...and then are sometimes revised

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  2. KateDecember 6, 2007 at 2:21 PM

    i wish that you actually tried to pick up people like that. i would totally go home with a dude like that. or pepper spray him.

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  3. ITVDecember 11, 2007 at 8:39 AM

    thats the normal response...to be honest its about 30/70.

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  4. Baby BearDecember 20, 2007 at 1:53 PM

    If only you could master the haiku pick-up line... then your response would be more 70/30, no?

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  5. OlgasmicDecember 21, 2007 at 9:13 AM

    80 Poems in 80 days. Starting right meow, as in today. Suggestion of one Mark Wallace. What y'all think?

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